Superdude Comics Presents: Bun Detective #1
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Panel 1: Green gaslight from a lamppost in the left-hand corner pours forth, illuminating a pink-purplish rabbit in a brown fedora and trenchcoat. Caption: “I’m a detective. And a bun. For anonymity, I go by BUN, Bun Detective.”
Panel 2: Bun detective walks down the street toward us, smoky yellowy gaslight bouncing from city streets to city brick building.
Panel 3: Bun detective faces away to a double-door building entrance. “Like I do every day, I head to the office in Chinatown Tower about 4am”
Panel 4: The office door, wooden with smoky glass and the lettering “Bun P.I.”
Panel 5: Bun detective, rocking the brown trenchcoat and fedora, steps in front of the door.
Panel 6: Inside the office, the purple-haired secretary, Martha, taps at a netbook computer on a large lacquered desk. In front of the desk, Bun detective’s head and fedora pokes up, “Hey Martha, what’s new?”
Panel 7: Martha answers: “Something of note showed up overnight on the encrypted classifieds… 500 pieces-ah-silver offered for finding stolen items. You’ll have to talk to the client, Alabama Mining, in Spacetown, though“
Panel 8: Bun detective begins to walk down the hall outside the office door. ”I don’t really like Spacetown, the space dolphins make me nervous… but 500 silver? That’s nearly 400,000 USD* “
*Note: due to inflation, 400,000 USD here, in 2109 is roughly equivalent to 40,000 USD today (2013).
Panel 9: “Time to head to the Spaceport.” The bun detective faces the elevators, or movers, alongside their control panel.










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